You make some good points about your cover, although there are lots of punctuation errors (capitalise 'I' please, and check apostrophes - if you don't know how to use them ask me).
You need now to explore the language you have used to address your target audience in your DPS< explaining why it is appropriate for them.
You make some good points about your cover, although there are lots of punctuation errors (capitalise 'I' please, and check apostrophes - if you don't know how to use them ask me).
ReplyDeleteYou need now to explore the language you have used to address your target audience in your DPS< explaining why it is appropriate for them.